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The cleanup page is a place where articles with problems (ungrammatical, poorly formatted, confusing, etc.) can be listed. Any user can fix or list articles here. Feel free to make use of the Wikipedia:Cleanup resources.

Older cleanup: Category:Cleanup by month. Pages are archived by month, but are still in need of cleanup (or de-listing if they have already been cleaned up).

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Resources for maintenance and collaboration  v·d·e 
Cleanup General - By topic - Move to Wiktionary - Wiki syntax - English grammar - Spam - Cleanup Taskforce - Wikify an article
Categories Orphaned - General cleanup - Articles to be categorized - Underpopulated - More...
Create an article Most wanted - Requests 1 year+ - Requested articles - Blank pages - Missing encyclopedic topics
Stubs Advice - Stubs by topic - Most wanted - Short pages - Incomplete lists - Collaboration of the week
Deletion Speedy - Articles - Categories - Redirects - Templates - Misc. pages - Jokes - Log - Discussion archives - Review
Polishing Expand an article - Peer review - Featured candidates - Fill a topic list - This week's improvement drive
Translation into English From foreign Wikipedias - Existing pages - Spanish Translation of the Week - Interwiki link checker
Images Requested pictures - Pictures needing attention - Images for cleanup - Image recreation requests - Caption review - Images with missing articles
Controversy Neutrality - Article accuracy - Statement accuracy - Copyright violations
To-do lists Articles - Projects - Books
More Cleaning department - Active Wiki Fixup Projects - Open tasks - Articles to merge - Articles to split - Requests - Backlogs - Expert Request Sorting

Also remember that you can submit an article in need of cleanup to the Cleanup Taskforce (which is always looking for members).

For more detailed information about this page, see Wikipedia:Cleanup process.

Just to let everyone know, there were 15,310 articles tagged for cleanup as of 6 June 2006. This means that we are working on 1.30% of English Wikipedia's articles. Most of these articles can be found under Category:Cleanup by month and are not listed below. Anything you can do to help clear the backlog would be greatly appreciated.

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Oldest listings

  • Please help reduce the size of this page by removing listings from previous months that have already been fixed. You may also remove listings that have not been fixed, as long as you move any outstanding comments to the article's talk page, and make sure that the article itself is still tagged for cleanup.
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June 2006

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June 19, 2006

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June 18, 2006

I cleaned it up a little, but its content could use some more work. --Mo-Al 16:18, 18 June 2006 (UTC)
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June 17 2006

  • Miami Seaquarium This article is an advertisement
  • Fisherian runaway This article is somewhat confusing and could also use some citations.
  • Transport in Cyprus This article is basically just a selection of facts and figures and needs reformatting and restructuring into sentences. --Daduzi talk 05:59, 17 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Heritage tourism fails to define the context of heritage, confuses it with religious pilgrimage and needs a more global view--JBellis 11:39, 17 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Choo San Goh Horribly formatted, one large lump of text. skorpion 14:02, 17 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Miss Nana Incoherent main section. --Charlesknight 16:27, 17 June 2006 (UTC)
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June 16, 2006

  • I believe this to be nonsense, but I'm somewhat biased. Could somebody sort out Donna_&_Tom? Dmn € Դմն 23:45, 15 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Urushiol-Induced Contact Dermatitis. Its not a horribly messy article but could still use some minor cleanup. Also, it needs to be written in a fromal tone.--GorillazFan Adam 00:38, 16 June 2006 (UTC)
  • The "Origins and variations of the word" section in Werewolf is messy and seems like it needs more citations. --66.241.95.65 16:10, 16 June 2006 (UTC)
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June 15, 2006

  • Oleg Korenfeld-traits of vanity pages but passes Google test.--Lkjhgfdsa 14:16, 15 June 2006 (UTC)
    It was just copyrighted material from Oleg's webpage. I cleaned up the article and tried to make it less of a copyright violation. Miguel Cervantes 16:41, 15 June 2006 (UTC)
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June 14, 2006

  • Wald (onomastics). No idea how to fix. -- User:Docu
  • Horse Article is long, disorganized and unwieldy. Also contains material already created in related subtopics. Repeats itself in several places, sometimes contradicts itself--probably in part due to length. Needs serious reorganization. Too much for one person to work on alone, especially someone as new as myself, needs people with good Wikipedia editing skills to create some new articles, merge sections of this article with existing ones, maybe expand the disambiguation page. Or make suggestions on the Talk:Horse page. This page also has been having some minor problems with vandalism. Montanabw 18:46, 14 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Football World Cup video games Sections on 2002 FIFA World Cup & 2006 FIFA World Cup Germany need re-writing to fit in with the style of the rest of the article. JP Godfrey (Talk to me) 21:20, 14 June 2006 (UTC)
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June 13,2006

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June 12, 2006

  • Harlesden - Reads too informally; infested with POV and unsourced comments. Also needs formatting and wikifying. DWaterson 21:16, 12 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Al Leong Terrible page. Filled with "clever" comments. Ace ofspade 18:52, 12 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Durham Miners Gala Link unlinked - and more context? Jackiespeel 16:46, 12 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Racko - Reads like a game manual; poorly formatted. bob rulz 07:09, 12 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Roth, Rott (onomastics) - Not sure how it should be cleanup. -- User:Docu
  • Kugel (disambiguation) — There are too many non-English words, too many links to articles not relevant to the English wikipedia, list is too indiscriminate. Since this is not the German wikipedia, I think most of the German material should be removed. If these problems are not corrected, page should be reverted to older version. --Batamtig
  • Cannon - Images are too many and poorly placed. Needs more information--The Ninth Bright Shiner talk 15:50, 13 June 2006 (UTC)
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June 11, 2006

I fixed up the introduction with a major rewrite, but the rest of the article needs cleanup from a referreed source. Decadencecavy 04:55, 16 June 2006 (UTC)

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June 10, 2006

  • Lalitaditya Muktapida - This article needs just some general editing (i.e. correction of spelling/grammatical errors) and also perhaps more research (Only one page out of one history book is cited).
  • Montreal hot dog- This stub is hard to look at, its so damn messy.--GorillazFan Adam 03:49, 11 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Cult film - the article used to be pretty good. Now, it's a total mess! (Ibaranoff24 19:06, 10 June 2006 (UTC))
  • Mundelein - "Also in 2005/2006 Mundelein has began to flourish. Many corperations have made their way into this suburb, such as Staples, TJ Max (and more), the amazing SUPER Target, White Castle, Pay Less Shoes, Pier 1 Imports, Fine Liquors, Jimmy Johns, Little Ceasars, Pet Supplies Plus, Home Depot, and Applebee's (which unfortunately had poor service upon its grand opening). It is apparent that Mundelein is booming and should no longer be considered a "bedroom" community." This paragraph seems somewhat biased, especially the comment on Applebee's service. Political Mind 00:42, 11 June 2006 (UTC)
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June 9, 2006

  • Primark -- article has been hacked around by various people and now has sentences out of place and is in general need of help!
  • Demetri Martin -- quite a of bit unencyclopedaic prose and uncited reports.
  • Social War - Confusing structure, needs more sections and better organization, no references at all. Red1 07:09, 9 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Ian Allan Publishing - Blatant advert. Tivedshambo 07:11, 9 June 2006 (UTC)
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June 8, 2006

  • Vitamin D - Article is confusing and is also missing information and explanations, I'm unsure which cleanup tag to use, but it definitely needs one. LuNatic 03:48, 8 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Watchmen - This article is up for a Feature Article designation, and needs copyediting to push it forward. If you can copyedit, you are encouraged to take a look and help out.--P-Chan 05:13, 8 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Minyanville - Needs formal tone improvement and other grammatical help. (Nick 13:56, 8 June 2006 (UTC))
  • Hurricane Andrew-needs cleaning up, numerous typing errors, and lack of concrete information.
  • British Sign Language - added some sections as requested, but the sections on becoming an interpreter seem inappropriate in tone, sounding like a 'how-to' guide.Andrew Spinner 17:09, 8 June 2006 (UTC)
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June 7, 2006

It was a copyvio. --Cherry blossom tree 21:40, 7 June 2006 (UTC)
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June 6, 2006

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June 5, 2006

  • Wisconsin BBYO - Article is informal. Also not much information present.
  • Jacob Calero - Article has a written account which provides good detail but it is a little informal and is missing standard structure. --Wootonius 19:20, 5 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Big Biz Tycoon - Article uses weasel words, awkard grammar, very little background information about the game. Green451 15:04, 5 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Samantha Eggar now seems to have four different current husbands! Assuming she is not a polyandrist, can someone please sort this out? Jon Rob 10:08, 5 June 2006 (UTC)
Sorted: it boils down to a single hoax editor. Reverted to last good version. Tearlach 23:34, 5 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Nicole bennett has been subject to persistent vandalism for days. I have semi-protected the page. I managed to remove some clearly nonsensical content, but I am not sure if what stands is accurate. Needs immediate attention Chancemill 11:42, 5 June 2006 (UTC)
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June 4, 2006

  • Objectivity (philosophy) is confused, uncited, poorly written, and poorly formatted. It is a rewrite of the disambiguity page for objectivity. Much of the content is erroneous as well as irrelevant to the specific nature of the article title.
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June 3, 2006

  • Anna Phoebe is a blatant advertisement and needs to have sections. Jman14141414 00:51, 4 June 2006 (UTC)
    • I rewrote it some to make it more clear and less POV, but it is still largely plagiarized from it's only source. --Mo-Al 23:59, 4 June 2006 (UTC)
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June 2, 2006

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June 1, 2006

  • Kelpie Collie is in major need of a cleanup and sourcing. skorpion 05:49, 1 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Joe Louis Arena need to be divided into sections, and almost completely rewritten. Right now it is just a random assortment of facts Grhs126student 17:32, 1 June 2006 (UTC)
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May 2006

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May 31, 2006

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May 30, 2006

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May 29, 2006

  • Floricienta - I made a lot of changes, added a side bar etc but this article still needs a LOT of attention, preferably from someone who knows a bit about the content as well.
  • Gus Fink - Perhaps a fairly notable artist (at least, makes a claim of notability), but the article is unwikified and contains a lot of unencyclopedic material. - Mike Rosoft 09:27, 29 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Marion College, Missouri - Notable as a former college, but like many former college articles, it's totally out of format. I've done a lot of these as of late and frankly would like a bit of a break. Sorry.  :/ Beginning 23:00, 29 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Thirty most populous cities in the world - Article is of dubious content. Needs attention.--68.236.5.240 02:13, 30 May 2006 (UTC)
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May 28, 2006

  • Unfinished Sympathy - Reads like an advertisement and consists of little more than positive critical reviews and praise.
  • The Open Boat and Other Tales - Much of this makes no sense and is written in the first person.
  • Marshall Middle School (Pittsburgh) - Spelling is poor and it needs some work in general. I removed a number of non-NPOV comments and wikified the page.
  • Rule 144 - Makes little sense. In dire need of general cleanup, perhaps an entire re-write. Political Mind 15:51, 28 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Drawball - Needs more editors to clean it up, and keep it clean. See Talk:Drawball. The article is one of the worst on Wikipedia, entirely full of unencyclopedic unsourced subtrivia. Every time an experienced editor removes something, it's replaced with more online webforum dick wagging over who has the biggest picture. - Hahnchen 03:48, 28 May 2006 (UTC)
  • The X-Files - Contains way too many lists, which comprise roughly 1/3 to 1/2 of the page. A substantial amount of information on the page is fan speculation rather than sourced references. The show was important in the history of television, but the Wikipedia page has become a collection of fan trivia. Much of the information can be integrated into the rest of the page (with some effort). The page also needs reorganization. Zepheus 05:27, 28 May 2006 (UTC)
  • History of NHL - Unwikified, possibly copied from somewhere. - Mike Rosoft 08:48, 28 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Lyn Duff - Too many external links, unencyclopedic style, possibly copied from somewhere. - Mike Rosoft 08:52, 28 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Justicia In Mundo - Unwikified, contains the text of the encyclical which would belong to Wikisource, not to Wikipedia (as long as it is really in public domain; the encyclical was written in 1971). - Mike Rosoft 08:58, 28 May 2006 (UTC)
  • List of Dukes of Alba - An anonymous user has changed María del Rosario Cayetana Fitz-James Stuart y Silva, 28th Duchess of Alba to María del Rosario Cayetana Fitz-James Stuart y Silva, 18th Duchess of Alba (and made a similar change for the previous one). I don't know whether the edit should be reverted as vandalism, or whether it is legitimate. - Mike Rosoft 17:45, 28 May 2006 (UTC)
  • DeltaAnime - Reads like an advertisment, many inaccurate facts are also listed in this page. Added more content.PhilGreen 14:06, 3 June 2006 (UTC)
  • Alonissos substantial chunks of the English are poor. Much ambiguous writing. Article discusses an island, a village, and a municipality with the same name in such a way that the reader is not sure which is being discussed. Needs general cleanup. Jd2718 21:00, 28 May 2006 (UTC)
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May 27, 2006

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May 26, 2006

  • Carola Unterberger-Probst Needs some grammar / style correction. I think the article is by a non-native English speaker or a computer translation? Rjwilmsi 08:11, 26 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Gopaldas Neeraj - Unwikified, possibly copied from somewhere, in any case the style is completely inappropriate and needs to be rewritten. - Mike Rosoft 08:28, 26 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Bratz (TV series) - A bit crufty and just needs a bit of a cleanup. Beno1000 16:13, 26 May 2006 (UTC)
  • CHIC (band) - In dire need of a complete rewrite/copyedit/formatting. --FuriousFreddy 01:52, 27 May 2006 (UTC)
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May 25, 2006

  • Kazuyoshi Ishii: Too much referencing to Kazuyoshi Ishii by full name with ages repeated; POV issue - K-1 "began with the revolutionary vision of Japan's Kazuyoshi Ishii."; grammar issues. JRHorse 23:10, 25 May 2006 (UTC)
  • [[2]] is not very clear or coherent. I have made specific suggestions on the talk page. Please comment and advise on suitability and/or help with re-organization of the pages. --Michel M Verstraete 22:24, 25 May 2006 (UTC).
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May 23, 2006

  • Bibliography of the Penguin Should be "marched into" ;) a merger with relevant page(s) as purely a list Jackiespeel 16:25, 24 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Stewart McPherson lots of things wrong with this - broken images, loose html code, parts of articles pasted in the article, etc. --Awiseman 20:34, 23 May 2006 (UTC)
  • PublicSecrecy needs NPOV'ing and is partly in first-person Supadawg - [[User_talk:Supadawg|Talk]] 21:09, 23 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Bloodscalp Tribe - A tribe of World of Warcraft trolls. I have just removed a load of spam from the article (a long list of World of Warcraft guilds, complete with their websites). What is left is a substandard stub. Needs context etc. - Mike Rosoft 09:07, 24 May 2006 (UTC)
    • There is also Bloodscalp. I have formerly deleted it as a vanity page; now I think that some of its history may be useful to be merged into Bloodscalp Tribe. - Mike Rosoft 12:14, 24 May 2006 (UTC)
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May 22, 2006

I rewrote it, however I could not find any sources.--Mo-Al 05:03, 26 May 2006 (UTC)
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May 21, 2006

  • ChapStick - still needs some work (both expansion and cleanup)--Mo-Al 00:56, 22 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Iron Guard - needs to clean up notes. PeterKristo 23:07, 21 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Chelsea boy - needs to include other definitions. Onishenko 20:43, 21 May 2006 (UTC)
  • American kestrel - Description section is potentially confusing with many redundancies. Algebra 18:13, 21 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Mirage Koas - Needs to be rewritten. States opinions and is full of grammatical errors. Ramzacloud 01:52, 22 May 2006 (UTC)
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May 20, 2006

Definitely needs editing for NPOV, if not deletion- is this school notable? Cpastern 20:44, 25 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Hermann Raupach - Incompletely translated from Russian (possibly from Russian Wikipedia). I have just fixed the broken format. - Mike Rosoft 16:05, 20 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Nissan Figaro - Needs better formatting. --ApolloBoy 01:33, 21 May 2006 (UTC)
    • And an expert to boot. (I tried with the formating... just could not get the topic)Eagle talk 03:31, 21 May 2006 (UTC)
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May 19, 2006

  • AMD K9. Confusing content.
  • V for Vendetta (film). FA reviewer has requested that this article undergo additional copyediting before it can have a FA status. Readability and clarity is key. --P-Chan 02:19, 19 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Cal Ripken Written more like a magazine feature than an encyclopedia article. --Napthene 01:36, 19 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Palm Island, Queensland - poor layout. QazPlm 00:37, 19 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Sydney Ling - anyone care to kick this around a bit? There appears to be a grain of notability in there, but it needs a major fact-check for some fairly extravagant claims. Tearlach 00:33, 19 May 2006 (UTC)
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May 18, 2006

  • LSDJ Contains articles on two entirely different subjects with the same name. Should probably be split into two pages with a disambiguation page, but I'm not experienced enough to try to tackle it myself. --HunterZ 20:57, 18 May 2006 (UTC)
I split them... though it looks like they could still use some (non-disambiguation) work. --Mo-Al 01:39, 19 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Kolel Chibas Yerushalayim (a Jewish charity organization active for more then 1½ centuries) - requires cleanup. Anyone availble to read and give me some guidelines. Thanx Mar0was 13:39, 18 May 2006 (EST)
  • Whitaker's Almanack Slightly breezy style - and a few more details perhaps?
  • Lives of the Twelve Caesars Long summary of the Julius Caesar section just added, unfortunately with illiteracies and misspellings. Has someone time to improve it? Andrew Dalby 09:16, 18 May 2006 (UTC)
Recast the "Influences Sources and veracity" paragraphs into single paragrapgh, "Veracity, criticism, and influences." MOved info about subjecetivity of Claudius section to "Veracity, critcism, and influences" section. Minor cleanup, typos. Minor cleanup Julius Caesar. :) Dlohcierekim 19:09, 18 May 2006 (UTC)
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May 17, 2006

  • fr:Titre de noblesse/[[3]] My French is not up to finding the relevant cleanup page - "summat fishy" going on with the pictures. (Can someone past as relevant please) Jackiespeel 15:48, 17 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Me and My Katamari - Various unencyclopedic comments have been added into the article, such as: "As always, the King sends the Prince to the Sunflower Continent, since it is full of stuff." - Mike Rosoft 18:28, 17 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Dartmouth (ship) - Unwikified, possible copyvio. - Mike Rosoft 19:20, 17 May 2006 (UTC)
Did what I could. :) Dlohcierekim 00:57, 18 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Contract killing - mainly poor grammar, and I removed the unencyclopedic line "Examples of contract killing can be found in the fictitious series, the Alex Rider Series, only in certain books, by Anthony Horowitz." 70.68.181.189 03:34, 18 May 2006 (UTC)
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May 16, 2006

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May 15, 2006

  • Uniform Crime Reports - In addition to expansion, the Index crime section is overly long and poorly formatted. The criticism sections should either be merged or defined separately. CRobey 17:35, 15 May 2006 (UTC)
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May 14, 2006

  • Paella - This article needs reformatting, it is an eyesore. skorpion 12:49, 15 May 2006 (UTC)
  • North Queensland Cowboys - Very informal language. Overly lengthy. --dan, dan and dan 09:50, 14 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Carlos Salinas- POV everywhere, along with a very informal voice. There may be some basic spelling and grammatical mistakes as well.
  • According to Arthur Conan Doyle, the author "helped form Portsmouth Football Club, playing as the club's first goalkeeper and occasionally as a right back between 1884 and 1890." Portsmouth F.C., otoh, calls that assertion "a common myth." It can't be both. Could someone who knows either the club or the author, do some factchecking? Aecis Appleknocker Flophouse 18:23, 14 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Ramona article's summary is poorly written and could use some more information.
  • Daniel Coburn article is very poorly written and does not conform to WP:BIO standards. Also used to include lots of POV.
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May 13, 2006

  • Npas: New article with very unorganized, uncouth, and generally hasty writing. In addition it is incredibly short. --Noetic Sage 21:03, 13 May 2006 (UTC)
    • attempted to clean up and added stub notice- may require further attention Jenks1987 21:52, 13 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Toyota Supra - Way too convoluted and some of the words need to be decapitalized. --ApolloBoy 00:02, 14 May 2006 (UTC)
I have attempted the cleanup, but it may still need attention from an expert in order to simplify what is being said, but I have got rid of repetition, grammar errors, stylistic errors and the like. --Knucmo2 10:31, 14 May 2006 (UTC)
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May 11, 2006

  • Religion and class. I created a stub on this with the suggestion of eventual merger with Religion and politics on development: the case for a separate article was, I admit, marginal. The redirect has been made, but no transfer of the stub. (And if there are other "(specific religion) and politics" and related articles, please add to the main one.) Jackiespeel 16:35, 11 May 2006 (UTC)
  • George Herbert(17th-cen English theological poet) + An editor tagged it 11:31, 1 May 2006 w/ summary "cleanup/moved quotations to wikiquote/shuffle of links therewith", w/o listing it here. + I've made style changes & massive moves to talk, discussed there. Still deserves an Eng Lit major's attention.Jerzy•t
  • Martha Raye could use style editing Alan smithee 01:04, 11 May 2006 (UTC)
    • attempted cleanup- may require further attention Jenks1987 22:13, 13 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Tokay gecko's Feet section needs some cleaning up to keep it from reading like an eighth-grade science report. -RaCha'ar 03:32, 11 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Opel Diplomat - Needs proper formating and needs a copyedit. --ApolloBoy 00:12, 13 May 2006 (UTC)
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May 9, 2006

  • Benjamin Wolf Löw - All the facts are mixed up. It is a very confusing article and dates need replacing; it gives two dates for Low's death.--Minfo 03:55, 10 May 2006 (UTC)
  • WCBI-TV - I can live with the first two sections... but everything below that needs to be looked at and/or overhauled. It seems like the article just dabbles way too much in minutiae. Amnewsboy 23:49, 9 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Spring holiday – I created this article, I'm somewhat emotionally involved in the subject. Would like some help with POV and organization. The article is very professionally collaberated, though, with alot of citations. Also would like some input on a possible article name change. — CRAZY`(IN)`SANE 04:02, 9 May 2006 (UTC)
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May 8, 2006

  • Sex, Toys & Chocolate - User:Ardenn marked this page for cleanup without reason. I've changed the wording slightly in the description, and cleaned up the episode list a bit. I'm still waiting for confirmation that the episode order presented is accurate.--Superwad 00:49, 7 June 2006 (UTC)
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May 7, 2006

  • Pyrokinesis list needs pared down, general organization, some thought put into structure and content to make this encyclopedic Rainman420 18:46, 7 May 2006 (UTC)
I think the long list of "pyrotecnics" can be replaced with Category:Fictional people with pyrokinesis. I entered those w/ article pages. Will wait before trimming the list/ :) Dlohcierekim 13:53, 18 May 2006 (UTC)
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May 6, 2006

  • Edmund Nelson(bio of rector & perhaps fa. of Horatio Nelson) - Ugly confusion between Edward & Edmund, here, in Rdr, & maybe another article. Details at talk:Edmund Nelson.Jerzy•t
  • Banja Koviljača needs citations, and its English needs some help. --Mo-Al 00:33, 6 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Rebecca John, needs a lot of work. All ready tagged for a few other things. Can someone who knows who she is and can tell what this says please help. --Yarnalgo 04:11, 6 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Grant's Memoirs needs a rewrite. Reads like a poor book review, has little factual information and does not follow wikipedia guidelines. --24.6.189.119 20:42, 6 May 2006 (UTC)
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May 5, 2006

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May 4, 2006

  • Pope Sixtus IV - References do not support article; in particular, I cannot find any references for the claim that Pope Sixtus IV was either of Jewish ancestry or secretly a practicing Jew. Adambondy 10:14, 5 May 2006 (UTC)
  • William Adlam(Bio of 18th-cen & Napol.-era Brit. Gen.)+ Added struc, chron, etc. - Still needs work: General c-u, & be sure who was shot on Nelson's ship; Dates!Jerzy•t
  • Women as theological figures Has been developed somewhat since I started it: and starting to go all over the place. Anyone care to make it more elegant? Jackiespeel 17:56, 4 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Adlam(English surname mixed with apparent family military history)+Rem self-lks; Turn truly ugly sentence into somewhat ugly list; stub & c-u tags; added Cat. - Not a Del candidate, but possibly should be reduced to a Dab; other options abound.Jerzy•t
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May 1, 2006

  • Longship - the article has a lot improved due to recently added material and subsequent editing for accuracy. However, it is far from what it could be (a great featured article), and needs more attention for language, factual accuracy, and structure. Cleanup tag originally added by User:Grumpy444grumpy, but I fully agree.--Stephan Schulz 11:38, 1 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Bully - The article was a bit of a mess to begin with, but has suddenly been dominated by a couple of well meaning, agenda driven, newbies. It needs some input from experienced editors to get it into shape --Zeraeph 20:37, 1 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Workplace bullying - At first glance this looks like a good article, until you realise nothing is cited or referenced and the whole piece may well be POV. --Zeraeph 20:37, 1 May 2006 (UTC)
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April 2006

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April 30, 2006

  • Visoko - Poor grasp of English; seems to have NPOV problems (sounds like inappropriate support for an archeological issue.) Adambondy 10:21, 30 April 2006 (UTC)
  • Nipponisation - Messy. May not be the correct term for the phenomenon. See talk page. -Seventh Holy Scripture 01:02, 30 April 2006 (UTC)
  • Western Schism - rather messy. Compare to [[4]] and see for yourself. There is no reference at all to the origins of the schism, so the article needs major work.
  • Kulachi - I did some minor wikifying and typo correction, but it needs grammatical improvements, possibly some rewriting as well, and I don't know the subject at all (got there via "Random article"). Jamoche 08:05, 30 April 2006 (UTC)
  • True-believer syndrome - Much of the article is about Robert T. Carroll and his book Skeptic's Dictionary, becasue it has an entry on it, instead of about the topic itself. Caroll himself has objected to so much of it being about him and his book rather than the topic itself. Bubba73 (talk), 18:51, 30 April 2006 (UTC)
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April 29, 2006

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April 28, 2006

  • Modern Spain seems to be little more than the succeding election results after 1978, and the whole article needs cleaning.
  • Ardengus needs working on to make it more encyclopedic, and needs much more information in the article-- right now the bibliography is longer than the main article itself! ekedolphin 06:50, 28 April 2006 (UTC)
  • Identified flying object - The tables need to be fixed. (And perhaps the article needs attention for other reasons? I am not sure; I'll leave it for others to decide.) - Mike Rosoft 19:10, 28 April 2006 (UTC)
  • Tadeusz Piechura needs some major, major clean-up work done on it-- in fact it's arguably an AFD candidate as it just seems to be a list of awards the person has won, and doesn't really help to indicate his notability. ekedolphin 23:43, 28 April 2006 (UTC)
    • looks like polish graphic designers scene. rename to nnn nnn_(designer) etc. if international relevant. Akidd dublin•tl•ctr-l 14:07, 4 May 2006 (UTC)
  • Girija Prasad Koirala, which is linked to on the front page, no less, needs a huge clean-up job. Currently it contains a whole lot of opinion, even going so far as to include the word "I", not to mention the poor grammar and capitalization. Valadius 01:30, 29 April 2006 (UTC)
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April 27, 2006

  • Aesthetic Realism needs a serious cleanup. It seems to have been a battleground of an edit war in the past, and has received little attention after being unprotected to make it less rife with mudslinging from both sides and more encyclopaedic. beekman 19:18, 27 April 2006 (UTC)
  • Josh Hamilton needs to be cleaned up and wikified. MonkeyWrench32 08:32, 27 April 2006 (UTC)
  • Spirit West Coast needs making more elegant. Jackiespeel 16:57, 27 April 2006 (UTC)
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April 26, 2006

  • Foreign relations of Afghanistan is very much out of date. It mainly involves the Taliban's relations with neighboring countries and mentions little about the changed relations since the fall of Afghanistan, especially with relation to Pakistan and the United States. I may have time to eventually get around to it. Helmandsare 17:35, 26 April 2006 (UTC)
  • Alex Glasgow isn't terribly well written, and is lacking references and sources. It could also do with rearranging into a more logical order. I don't know enough about the subject though to do it myself though. DWaterson 19:39, 26 April 2006 (UTC)
  • Rambler Marlin - The whole page is just a huge paragraph. --ApolloBoy 01:20, 27 April 2006 (UTC)
    • I split up the article into paragraphs, but it is very confusing. --Mo-Al 23:07, 20 May 2006 (UTC)
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April 25, 2006

  • Adil Abdul-Mahdi is the vice president of Iraq. There are still some facts that I have not been able to verify, eg..who took over as financial minister after he became vp. Any help would be appreciated. Thanks. OSU80 03:39, 26 April 2006 (UTC)
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April 24, 2006

  • Go Daddy could use a cleanup. There's uncited material, and parts that look like they're an advertisement for the company. I've worked on it and it reads a bit better, but the article still needs work. C3po 15:56, 24 April 2006 (UTC)
  • The Long Winters needs some serious npov'ing. Aecis Mr. Mojo risin' 09:07, 24 April 2006 (UTC)
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April 23, 2006

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April 21, 2006

  • Hiberno-English - A lot of unencycolpaedic phrasing at present. Doesn't cite sources for a lot of stuff. - RedHot 15:54, 21 April 2006 (UTC)
  • Visalia, California - a lot of irrelevant and/or uncatagorized stuff added this month.
  • Incarceration - definition needs to be clearer, and also some POV.
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April 20, 2006

  • Rule 144 Bit of a shocker really. Shadow007 15:10, 20 April 2006 (UTC)
  • Celebrity Fit Club Just total fancruft all over. This page is insanely long, poorly written, and someone needs to inform the editor to lay off the page, it was just fine. Please fix if you can. 68.180.1.141 03:32, 21 April 2006 (UTC)
  • I did some cleanup on this, removing most of the fancruft. It still needs work, but at least it is now much shorter. Ckessler 19:11, 23 April 2006 (UTC)
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April 18, 2006

  • William A. Webb This lengthy Confederate Navy article has loads of gramatical and styling errors. BusterD 01:00, 18 April 2006 (UTC)
    • got the first section cleaned, boy what a mess! I don't think there are enough italics Kendrick7 05:59, 18 April 2006 (UTC)
    • I just plowed through the whole article copyediting, but I left the cleanup tag in there because there's still quite some room for improvement. --doubleslash 07:02, 18 April 2006 (UTC)
  • Volkswagen Gol - This is a total mess with far too many pictures... --ApolloBoy 05:12, 18 April 2006 (UTC)
    • I took some pictures off the top thing, but the bottom can still use some cleanup, and I didn't check the article itself much. Blackcanoflysol
    • Removed most of the images, leaving only one example of each model. All the images remani in the code, but will not appear in the article. Alexvickers
  • Matt Winston(Amer. actor, StarTrek & al)- bare stub that attempts to duplicate his IMDb page. Needs drastic weeding.Jerzy•t
  • Gahlot needs cleaning up. It's written very much from an insider perspective, it contains too much jargon to inform the unknowing reader. Aecis Mr. Mojo risin' 20:32, 18 April 2006 (UTC)
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April 16, 2006

  • The List (My Name Is Earl) - There has been some discussion on the reformatting of this article. Namely, whether the List should be organized alphabetically or by the number associated with each wrongdoing. Alphabetical organization doesn't seem like the best way to organize it. However, there have been some discrepancies with numbering in the episodes. So, some executive ruling may be required. Discussions on the topic can be found in Talk:My Name Is Earl and Talk:The List (My Name is Earl). --Mongrel 07:57, 16 April 2006 (UTC)
Had a go, I managed to do most of the article, but about half of the diseases still need to have their description cleaned up.--Doug (talk) 21:45, 16 April 2006 (UTC)
  • Unlimited_paenga_tawhiti - looks as though it was written by staff or pupils of the school. need to be checked for copyvios from their website[5] (I couldn't check because the popups on their website are broken.dramatic 11:04, 17 April 2006 (UTC)
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April 14, 2006

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